Bertie’s diary

Dear Diary,

I have had one of the worst days of my entire life. First, I always get detention, the food is ROTTON and the bully I met is called Basher Beaumont, he is a real bully. Next, I went to my bed and found an old and microscopic letter right on the cushion. It looked like it was written with a quill and at the bottom of the letter it looked like it was written by my loving and caring mother, who loved to bake. However, I’m not quiet sure because I only get to see her at Christmas and I’m depressed about that.

The next day, I woke up late by the smell of fried bacon because I forgot to set my alarm clock for 6:00AM. But I did get down the stairs, turned left and down the corridor but only half way because I got stopped by Basher Beaumont. He tried to put black and sticky shoe polish in my hair and he did, so now I had to go to class with black hair with what looked like brown highlights in it.

Next, I had my English test and a really boring one because he is so annoying. Mr Carter, who is my English teacher, always puts heavy books on people’s heads and this time it was me because I got 1/10 on my test.


Written by Amelia




One thought on “Bertie’s diary

  1. Miss Smith

    Excellent, you have included fronted adverbials and arranged your writing into paragraphs. Next we will look at including brackets in our writing.
    Miss Smith 🙂



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