Let me out

Dear mum,

I’ve been thinking about this for a long time.

Please let me out of the compound.  It’s so dusty and dry in here but out there, there is fresh fruit and green grass.  The wild life all around me, I could learn so much out there.  Please let me out or read my other reasons.

If I left the compound I could help dad guarding the fence and he taught me how to handle a gun in case I am under attack by lions and other predators.  I promise I won’t leave dad’s sight at all.  I promise I will be careful.

Finally, I really want to help the lion cub because he is left alone with no family or protection.  He could die out there with no one to help him.

Please think about it.

Your sincerely,

Bertie

By ben

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  1. peyton

    I would say yes if I had read your letter it persuaded me to let the character out and you really put some effort into it.

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  2. swallowshannon

    Same with me but have you included what miss told you to. You included what she said 🙂

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